There were spots I didn't like and spots I loved, unfortunately the beat isn't something I would consider hiphop, it's more pop/ techno than anything but I really liked the intro melody... but the kick threw me off. it was that generic tempo that everyone uses those kicks for :/ other than that, the lyricist was on point. Nice flow, Nice effects. great work, I'd rather hear this on the radio than most garbage lol
Wasn't bad at all but I don't feel that it belongs in the Hip Hop or rap Genre. I do like it though. surprising. Nice little melody, good vibes.. Keep it up
Yeah sometimes i dont know where to throw my beats as far as genre go but because i know hip hop have a wide variety of sounds that make a beat thats why i go hiphop lol but thanks for the listen glad u enjoyed it bro
some soothing for the soul. Great work. the thing I like msot about this is the mood it sets.
TOOOOL!!!!!!! Hands down the best Rock band out there. Great work on the Keys
I Like the gerbil noises :P but I was waiting for more bass and snare!
That basssssssssss. that low one in specific. I broke a picture frame on my wall n***a.... you owe me 5 bucks to replace that picture! :P
Awwwww yeeee hahaha this the kind of feedback I like - All about my tracks committing criminal damage to personal property.
The Piano was beautiful and would have been more enticing to the ears if it was made originally by you to go along with the beat. (Samples take away a lot of emotion from the beat personally. Originality is key ) I like what you did though. I really do.... Other than the strings. The strings were off pitch with the Piano melody.
Overall it was fair+
Thanks for the critique.
I really appreciate it.
Great work and mad props on the message behind the great sound of emotion flowed through the verses. and this beat!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Loved it.
Lol. Dang. I'm glad you like it so much, man. Even though Imma guess the majority of the props goes for the beat, and thusly Rassu Productions, but I guess I get some credit for the beat choice. The message truly does come from my past experience and experiences. I will continue to attempt to create each new song in a higher caliber. Thanks so much for this feedback, man. My most recent tracks ain't been grabbing people much- so it's good to know I've still got it.
The beat was so sick... the melody was enchanting. Love the Piano. Sounds like it was all the right volume/mix/mastering. Great track homie. Keep up the good work
Thanks, man. It's really good to hear that kind of stuff, with as hard as I worked on this track. I couldnt have done anything besides that, though. This track is my baby. XD
Great message, sad but true. I feel you man. and that beat!? what piano did you use? Couldn't have been a better beat for the feel of this song. great work man and keep it up homie!
Thanks S-Rock, glad you liked the track. The piano is a soundfont called Rolaand_64voice.
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