There is potential.
Don't take criticism too hard, you got talent, Keep it up and keep working on your music. Most people can't even do what you just created here. I mean, you can tell you're fairly new to producing music but so was everyone else at your point.
Anyway some of the song was a little over EQ'ed or at least it sounded like it distorted when the guitar/Slayer was turned up too high. The Piano was actually my favorite part :D Keep it up, you got potential
This should help for a bit, (I hope)
3.59 / 5.00 (+ 0.73)
Return the favor mate :D and Good luck on future projects :D